Editing Luke Maddison (section)

==Character==

Luke is defined by a sense of responsibility that outweighs his confidence in exercising it. As the eldest, he was trusted by their parents to look after the others — "He was the eldest, trusted by his parents to look after them. It was his job to decide." Yet he is acutely aware that his authority has eroded. As children, he was the family prankster until his sisters banded together and turned the tables on him. By the time they arrive at Portian House, he muses: "They won't obey me anyway" and wonders "how much of his authority remained". In practice, Susan leads more often than he does — she is the one who insists on exploring, who bargains with Madesto, who insists on joining the Rocosa reconnaissance. Luke's role is less commander than guardian: he asks questions, raises objections, and provides a steadying moral voice.

He is initially sceptical and dismissive. When Emily tries to tell him and Susan that Meg has been kidnapped through a portal to another world, he brushes her off — "We've no time for playing" — and hits her when she persists. The guilt of this moment stays with him, and he apologises once the truth becomes undeniable. It is a formative error: Luke becomes more conscious of having dismissed her wrongly, though he still doubts her later portal-landmark memory before she is proved right again.

He is protective, sometimes to a fault. When Madesto demands Susan as payment for revealing Emily's location, Luke's instinct is to refuse — "I won't let you" — though Susan overrules him. When Alucio plans the Rocosa reconnaissance, Luke insists on going himself rather than sending Susan, arguing "It's too dangerous for Susan." His protectiveness is genuine but can be paternalistic, and Susan challenges it more than once.

His moral compass is central to his character. He is uncomfortable with the plan to kidnap a Bestia for information: "I don't like the idea of kidnapping someone, whoever they are." When the captured Nena's chemise rides up during the struggle, Luke pulls it down immediately — a small act of dignity that sets the tone for his treatment of her. On Shell Island, when the others prepare to leave Nena alone overnight, Luke refuses: "Because you're alone. I thought you might be frightened." He stays with her, and this compassion becomes the foundation of their relationship.

He is practically capable without being showy. He learns crab fishing from Fabra, rows the longboat, and participates in the Sometria reconnaissance and rescue. He is not a natural warrior like Alucio or a bold improviser like Susan, but he is reliable, steady, and willing to do the unglamorous work. His contributions are quiet but essential.

His relationship with Nena is one of the clearest personal arcs of his story. From reluctant kidnapper to compassionate guardian, Luke's treatment of Nena — insisting she need not call him "sir", giving her choices rather than commands, staying with her when she is afraid — stands in direct contrast to the Bestia system of ownership and deference. By the epilogue, they live together in the woods near Alucio. Luke is learning to hunt while Nena gathers plants. He notes that she is "slowly losing her indoctrination" — she calls him "Luke" now, though "it sometimes sounds like just a variation of 'sir'." He tries not to make deference easy for her, acknowledging the difficulty of unlearning a lifetime of conditioning. When he thinks of Toia walking calmly to her death, the weight of that knowledge informs his patience with Nena's recovery.

As narrator of the epilogue, Luke is reflective, warm, and slightly wry. He observes the family's new life with affection: Susan and Raf's growing relationship, Meg and Emily staying with Fabra, Meg's talk of starting a resistance. He notes, with characteristic understatement, "I've had enough of bells to last a lifetime." His final thoughts return to the buried portal: "Sometimes, when out in the woods, I pass by the site of the portal, now buried forever, and wonder what is happening in our old world."

In summary: responsible, cautious, morally principled, and quietly compassionate. He is the steadying presence in a family of stronger personalities, and his gentleness — particularly toward Nena — proves to be his defining strength.