Alucio - Revision history

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	\| insequel = yes		\| insequel = yes
	\| family = [[Genita]] (wife)		\| family = [[Elisa]] (sister)<br>[[Genita]] (wife)
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	A representative line that captures his voice: "This is something that needs careful thought." — measured, strategic, and patient, yet carrying the implicit promise that the thought will lead to action.		A representative line that captures his voice: "This is something that needs careful thought." — measured, strategic, and patient, yet carrying the implicit promise that the thought will lead to action.

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	A representative line that captures his voice: "This is something that needs careful thought." — measured, strategic, and patient, yet carrying the implicit promise that the thought will lead to action.		A representative line that captures his voice: "This is something that needs careful thought." — measured, strategic, and patient, yet carrying the implicit promise that the thought will lead to action.

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			\| 556 \|\| 39 \|\| Maddisons enter Altierra
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Speech

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	==Speech==		==Speech==

			Alucio's speech is Altierran English — fluent, direct, and marked by a few archaic constructions that distinguish him from the Maddisons' modern British register. He uses "may hap" for "perhaps" and "naught" for "nothing," and his affirmative "aye" places him firmly in Altierran vernacular. These markers are subtle but consistent, signalling his native identity without making his speech difficult to follow.

			He is direct and commanding when the situation demands it. "Stay still." "No sounds yet." "Come out now." These first words to the Maddisons are imperative and clipped — no preamble, no explanation. In moments of danger, his speech becomes minimalist, stripped to essential instructions: "We'll hide, you carry on." "Watch her, I'll get the rope." This economy reflects a lifetime of acting under pressure where wasted words can be dangerous.

			He is more expansive when teaching or planning. His explanation of Altierran politics, while eventually overwhelming the tired Maddisons, is patient and thorough. He presents the Sometria plan methodically, walking through each element before asking for input. His teaching register is Socratic — he asks questions and waits for responses rather than lecturing: "Are you happy, Susan?" He includes Emily in the discussion with "You have a voice as well," a phrase that captures his instinct to consult rather than exclude.

			He can be sharp when overridden. When Luke suggests rushing to the Cregan, Alucio's response is blunt: "People don't choose to go to the Cregan, boy." The "boy" is deliberate — a reminder that Luke, despite his age, does not understand Altierra. He is equally sharp with Susan when she attracts attention in Peyrol: "I told you to be quiet. You attract too much attention." These moments are not cruel but firm — the sharpness of a man responsible for keeping people alive.

			His humour is dry and understated. When Madesto complains that his genitals itch and begs to be released, Alucio's response is flat and unyielding: "Just live with it." His farewell exchange with Susan at the portal — promising "I won't" fill in the tunnel and "I'll hide it well" — is warm beneath a jocular surface, both practical and tender.

			He uses Altierran terms naturally — Sombras (nightfall), Alba (dawn), and the ranks of Bestia and Priestess hierarchy — without pausing to translate, because for him these are not foreign terms but the vocabulary of daily life. This natural usage contrasts with the Maddisons' halting adoption of the same words.

			A representative line that captures his voice: "This is something that needs careful thought." — measured, strategic, and patient, yet carrying the implicit promise that the thought will lead to action.

	==History==		==History==

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Character

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	==Character==		==Character==

			Alucio is defined by competence, quiet authority, and a strategic mind that balances caution with decisive action. He first appears as a rescuer — throwing himself across Susan's back in the undergrowth, whispering "Stay still" as a Guardia patrol passes, then leading the children to safety. This first impression sets the pattern: Alucio appears when danger is imminent, acts without hesitation, and expects immediate compliance.

			He is a tracker and woodsman of exceptional skill. When Emily runs away alone, he finds her trail not by footprints but by a freshly broken branch, "low down, hinting that a small person had passed." During the escape from Sometria, he leads the group through thick undergrowth, down hollows and over rocks, "the others intent on just keeping up with him." He hoists Meg over his shoulder when she is screaming and cannot run, carrying her through the woods with a strength that the Maddison siblings cannot match. His physical capability is never showy — it is simply the foundation of everything he does.

			He is the group's strategist. Every plan — the Madesto confrontation, the Rocosa infiltration, the Bestia kidnapping, the Sometria rescue — originates with Alucio or is shaped by his tactical input. He thinks in terms of reconnaissance, timing, and risk: "We wait another three hours or so until the night is far in." He insists on careful preparation: when Luke wants to rush to the Cregan immediately, Alucio overrides him — "This is something that needs careful thought." He is willing to take risks, but only calculated ones, and he is honest about the odds: "It's dangerous. If they catch us, you'll be in the same plight as Meg."

			He is a natural leader who consults rather than commands. When presenting the Sometria plan, he asks each person in turn for their opinion — including Emily: "And lastly, Emily. You have a voice as well." He accepts objections and modifies plans based on input, but he is firm when he needs to be: "No, it's too risky. I'd prefer to go alone but Nena will be able to give me information so she has to come." The Maddisons defer to him not because he demands it but because his judgement has repeatedly proven sound.

			He is morally principled without being sentimental. He proposes kidnapping a Bestia for information — a plan that troubles Luke — but promises "I promise we'll treat her with all decency. And we'll release her as soon as we have Meg. She won't suffer." During the capture, Luke preserves Nena's modesty when her chemise rides up; Alucio handles the practical work of binding her wrists. He unties her on the beach before sailing and apologises for the restraint: "I'm sorry I had to tie you up, but I couldn't allow you to run away." His morality is practical: he does what is necessary without inflicting unnecessary suffering.

			He is compassionate in understated ways. When the Rocosa rescue fails and Susan is despondent, he sits beside her and wraps an arm around her shoulders: "It's not been wasted. At least we know where Meg is now." He comforts without minimising, and redirects despair into planning. At the portal farewell, Susan asks him to give her love to Raf and not to fill in the tunnel; Alucio responds with characteristic warmth beneath a wry surface: "I won't. I'll hide it well."

			He is also a teacher. He explains Altierran political structure, geography, and social customs to the Maddisons, patient as their "heads swarmed with Spanish-sounding names of towns and ranks." He and Raf teach Susan the Bestia ways — curtseying, deference, the vocabulary of "master" and "lord" — in private, recognising her discomfort. He shares his own backstory with Luke on the road to Rocosa: "We grew up in Peyrol. My family and Fabra's. Our families were fishermen — ordinary people." He was "never that happy with being on the water" and turned to hunting and the hills — a quiet rejection of the family trade that shaped his entire life.

			He is not a wandering hero. He has a wife, Genita, a home in the hills, and a life as a hunter that he returns to after the crisis. When the Maddisons settle at Elísal, he soon goes back to Genita and the hunt, reappearing when his help is needed — to search for the portal, to bid farewell. By the epilogue, he lives near Luke and Nena, his nearest neighbours, a quiet presence in the background of their new life.

			In summary: competent, strategic, principled, and quietly compassionate. He is the adult the Maddisons need — steady where they are impulsive, knowledgeable where they are ignorant, and willing to risk his life for people he owes nothing to.

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Appearance

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	==Appearance==		==Appearance==

			Alucio's face is "rough and scarred, deeply tanned from a lifetime outside, but not unfriendly" — the first description the novel gives, when he throws back his hood after rescuing the children. His appearance reflects his life as a hunter and outdoorsman: weathered, practical, and hardened by years in the hills. Susan compares him to a cat on watch — "Alucio sat alert, like a cat on watch; Susan half-expected to see his ears twitching" — suggesting a lean, coiled physicality.

			His exact age is unstated; he is an adult contemporary of Fabra's family, six years younger than Fabra, who has a grown son. He wears Altierran outdoor clothing: a hooded cloak fastened at the neck, boots, and practical garments suited to tracking through rough terrain. He carries a knife, which he uses during the Rocosa infiltration — kicking down a door with blade extended. No further physical details are given in the novel beyond his scarred, tanned face and his alert, capable bearing.

			The reference photo shows the following details not explicit in the novel text: dark brown, thick, medium-length hair styled messily with strands falling over the forehead and temples; a full, short-cropped dark beard and moustache; dark brown or hazel eyes set under a prominent, slightly furrowed brow; a rectangular face with a strong, well-defined jawline; a fair to olive complexion showing signs of weathering and tanning from outdoor exposure, with subtle lines around the eyes and forehead; a sturdy, athletic build with broad shoulders.

	==Character==		==Character==

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	Alucio is ~~a hunter on~~ [[~~Isla Arbojan~~]] who rescues ~~three~~ of the [[~~Maddisons~~]] ~~from~~ the ~~Guardia and helps them to rescue their sister~~.		Alucio is the [[Maddisons\|Maddison]] siblings' first ally in Altierra — a hunter who rescues them from a Guardia patrol in the woods and becomes the strategist, guide, and leader of every subsequent rescue attempt. He is the character who understands Altierra's politics, geography, and social customs, and who translates that knowledge into actionable plans. Without Alucio, the Maddisons would have been captured or killed within hours of arriving; with him, they mount a dangerous infiltration of Rocosa and a successful rescue at Sometria. He returns to his wife [[Genita]] and the hunt after the Maddisons settle, reappearing in the epilogue as Luke's nearest neighbour.

	==Appearance==		==Appearance==

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	[[File:Alucio1.jpg\|thumb\|center\|400px\|''Alucio in the woods'']]		[[File:Alucio1.jpg\|thumb\|center\|400px\|''Alucio in the woods'']]

	[[File:Genita1.jpg\|thumb\|center\|~~600px~~\|''Genita in their home'']]		[[File:Genita1.jpg\|thumb\|center\|800px\|''Genita in their home'']]

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