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LairaG: /* The Heartwild */

2026-08-12T12:50:33Z

The Heartwild

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	The '''third stage''' is entering into the Heartwild.		The '''third stage''' is entering into the Heartwild.
	* An encounter with the ~~Pursuit Corps~~.		* An encounter with the Dark Wolves.
	* Some evidence of Meg's network.		* Some evidence of Meg's network.

LairaG: /* The Heartwild */

2026-05-31T20:19:05Z

The Heartwild

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	===The Heartwild===		===The Heartwild===
	Luke ~~and Emily pass over~~ the ~~inner~~ mountains ~~and~~ into the Heartwild ~~- the area to~~ the ~~east inhabited only by wanderers and rebels~~. Some ~~adventures here. Eventually they find~~ Meg~~, via her rebel band, have been aware of them for days~~.		The trip to the Heartwild is in three phases (one chapter each?).

			The '''first stage''' is heading up to the mountains, passing through familiar countryside. They stop at Luke's house.
			* Here they encounter a runaway Bestia who wants to be left alone. She doesn't want to be helped.

			The '''second stage''' is crossing the mountains themselves.
			* They shelter with a family in the mountain who are ambivalent to the Priestesses.

			The '''third stage''' is entering into the Heartwild.
			* An encounter with the Pursuit Corps.
			* Some evidence of Meg's network.

	==Notes==		==Notes==

LairaG: /* Elisal */

2026-05-31T20:00:42Z

Elisal

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	===Elisal===		===Elisal===

	When he arrives, he finds that Susan is pregnant. He asks her to help him find Meg but, although she wants to, Raf insists that she stays out of it, not wanting her even to give advice. But, when Raf is out of the room, she gives him a tip ~~- a person or place~~ to go.		When he arrives, he finds that Susan is pregnant. He asks her to help him find Meg but, although she wants to, Raf insists that she stays out of it, not wanting her even to give advice. But, when Raf is out of the room, she gives him a tip. She says that Meg returned in secret one time after she left Elisal and saw Susan alone. She said that, if Susan was ever looking for her, she should go to the Heartwild and look for "Kahlo" (from Frida Kahlo).

	After a few days, he leaves, heading towards the mountains. He suspects he is being followed and, after a day, Emily appears. He wants to take her back but she says that Fabra, Raf and Susan agreed that she could accompany. He suspects that this is a lie but she says that, if he returns, she will follow him again. He reluctantly agrees to let her come.		After a few days, he leaves, heading towards the mountains. He suspects he is being followed and, after a day, Emily appears. He wants to take her back but she says that Fabra, Raf and Susan agreed that she could accompany. He suspects that this is a lie but she says that, if he returns, she will follow him again. He reluctantly agrees to let her come.

LairaG: /* Elisal */

2026-05-30T18:16:56Z

Elisal

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	After a few days, he leaves, heading towards the mountains. He suspects he is being followed and, after a day, Emily appears. He wants to take her back but she says that Fabra, Raf and Susan agreed that she could accompany. He suspects that this is a lie but she says that, if he returns, she will follow him again. He reluctantly agrees to let her come.		After a few days, he leaves, heading towards the mountains. He suspects he is being followed and, after a day, Emily appears. He wants to take her back but she says that Fabra, Raf and Susan agreed that she could accompany. He suspects that this is a lie but she says that, if he returns, she will follow him again. He reluctantly agrees to let her come.

			===The Heartwild===
			Luke and Emily pass over the inner mountains and into the Heartwild - the area to the east inhabited only by wanderers and rebels. Some adventures here. Eventually they find Meg, via her rebel band, have been aware of them for days.

	==Notes==		==Notes==

LairaG: /* -Elisal= */

2026-05-30T16:19:54Z

-Elisal=

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	He returns to his house. At first he considers going to Alucio but does not want to put him at risk again. The only person who could help is Meg but he does not know where she is. Consequently, he makes his way to Elisal where Meg used to live.		He returns to his house. At first he considers going to Alucio but does not want to put him at risk again. The only person who could help is Meg but he does not know where she is. Consequently, he makes his way to Elisal where Meg used to live.

	==-Elisal===		===Elisal===

	When he arrives, he finds that Susan is pregnant. He asks her to help him find Meg but, although she wants to, Raf insists that she stays out of it, not wanting he ee		When he arrives, he finds that Susan is pregnant. He asks her to help him find Meg but, although she wants to, Raf insists that she stays out of it, not wanting her even to give advice. But, when Raf is out of the room, she gives him a tip - a person or place to go.

			After a few days, he leaves, heading towards the mountains. He suspects he is being followed and, after a day, Emily appears. He wants to take her back but she says that Fabra, Raf and Susan agreed that she could accompany. He suspects that this is a lie but she says that, if he returns, she will follow him again. He reluctantly agrees to let her come.

	==Notes==		==Notes==

LairaG: /* Summary */

2026-05-30T16:14:15Z

Summary

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	'''Meg''' had been at Elisal for a while but her resistance against the Priestesses, although minor, had put the others in danger and she left, heading into the high inland area to start a rebel band, helping to free or de-program Bestia.		'''Meg''' had been at Elisal for a while but her resistance against the Priestesses, although minor, had put the others in danger and she left, heading into the high inland area to start a rebel band, helping to free or de-program Bestia.

			===The capture===

	One day, when Luke and Nena are out, the latter is spotted by some Guardia. Luke is initially unseen by them and, when he attempts to rescue her, she drops into a sumisa position, indicating to him to remain hidden. He realises that he would only be captured as well, leaving no one to save them, and he stops while Nena is taken away.		One day, when Luke and Nena are out, the latter is spotted by some Guardia. Luke is initially unseen by them and, when he attempts to rescue her, she drops into a sumisa position, indicating to him to remain hidden. He realises that he would only be captured as well, leaving no one to save them, and he stops while Nena is taken away.

			He returns to his house. At first he considers going to Alucio but does not want to put him at risk again. The only person who could help is Meg but he does not know where she is. Consequently, he makes his way to Elisal where Meg used to live.

			==-Elisal===

			When he arrives, he finds that Susan is pregnant. He asks her to help him find Meg but, although she wants to, Raf insists that she stays out of it, not wanting he ee

	==Notes==		==Notes==

LairaG: /* Summary */

2026-05-29T19:21:27Z

Summary

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	'''Meg''' had been at Elisal for a while but her resistance against the Priestesses, although minor, had put the others in danger and she left, heading into the high inland area to start a rebel band, helping to free or de-program Bestia.		'''Meg''' had been at Elisal for a while but her resistance against the Priestesses, although minor, had put the others in danger and she left, heading into the high inland area to start a rebel band, helping to free or de-program Bestia.

	One day, when Luke and Nena are out, the latter is spotted by some Guardia. Luke is initially unseen by them and, when he attempts to rescue her, she drops into a sumisa position, indicating to him to ~~stop~~. He realises that he would only be captured as well, leaving no one to save them, and he stops while Nena is taken away.		One day, when Luke and Nena are out, the latter is spotted by some Guardia. Luke is initially unseen by them and, when he attempts to rescue her, she drops into a sumisa position, indicating to him to remain hidden. He realises that he would only be captured as well, leaving no one to save them, and he stops while Nena is taken away.

	==Notes==		==Notes==

LairaG: /* Summary */

2026-05-29T19:19:43Z

Summary

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	'''Susan and Emily''' are still at Elisal; the former is with Raf in a separate building while the latter lives with Fabra. Susan is pregnant.		'''Susan and Emily''' are still at Elisal; the former is with Raf in a separate building while the latter lives with Fabra. Susan is pregnant.

	'''Meg''' had been at Elisal for a while but her resistance against the Priestesses, although minor, had put the others in danger and she left, heading into the high inland area to start a rebel band, helping to free or de-~~cult~~ Bestia.		'''Meg''' had been at Elisal for a while but her resistance against the Priestesses, although minor, had put the others in danger and she left, heading into the high inland area to start a rebel band, helping to free or de-program Bestia.

	One day, when Luke and Nena are out, the latter is spotted by some Guardia. Luke is initially unseen by them and, when he attempts to rescue her, she drops into a sumisa position, indicating to him to stop. He realises that he would only be captured as well, leaving no one to save them, and he stops while Nena is taken away.		One day, when Luke and Nena are out, the latter is spotted by some Guardia. Luke is initially unseen by them and, when he attempts to rescue her, she drops into a sumisa position, indicating to him to stop. He realises that he would only be captured as well, leaving no one to save them, and he stops while Nena is taken away.

LairaG: /* Summary */

2026-05-29T19:18:53Z

Summary

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	'''Luke and Nena''' have settled down in the hills as a hunter and gatherer. They are half a day's walk from Alucio. While still sometimes being subservient to him, she is gradually accepting her freedom and equality.		'''Luke and Nena''' have settled down in the hills as a hunter and gatherer. They are half a day's walk from Alucio. While still sometimes being subservient to him, she is gradually accepting her freedom and equality.

	'''Susan and Emily''' are still at Elisal; the former is with Raf in a separate building while the latter lives with Fabra.		'''Susan and Emily''' are still at Elisal; the former is with Raf in a separate building while the latter lives with Fabra. Susan is pregnant.

			'''Meg''' had been at Elisal for a while but her resistance against the Priestesses, although minor, had put the others in danger and she left, heading into the high inland area to start a rebel band, helping to free or de-cult Bestia.

			One day, when Luke and Nena are out, the latter is spotted by some Guardia. Luke is initially unseen by them and, when he attempts to rescue her, she drops into a sumisa position, indicating to him to stop. He realises that he would only be captured as well, leaving no one to save them, and he stops while Nena is taken away.

	==Notes==		==Notes==

LairaG at 19:14, 29 May 2026

2026-05-29T19:14:08Z

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	The sequel to [[the Snow Beyond the Wall]]		The sequel to [[the Snow Beyond the Wall]]

	~~Luke~~ is ~~living happily with Nena; Meg has formed a resistance band which he disapproves~~ of.		==Summary==
			It is four years since the events of The Snow Beyond the Wall.

	~~Then~~ Nena ~~is captured by~~ the ~~Priestesses~~ and ~~returned to slavery~~. ~~Luke must get Meg~~'s ~~aid~~ to ~~save~~ her.		'''Luke and Nena''' have settled down in the hills as a hunter and gatherer. They are half a day's walk from Alucio. While still sometimes being subservient to him, she is gradually accepting her freedom and equality.

			'''Susan and Emily''' are still at Elisal; the former is with Raf in a separate building while the latter lives with Fabra.

			==Notes==

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