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* The adult version reveals | * The adult version reveals John's sexual fantasies. He had been spanked by his mother when young and tried this out on his sisters. When he was stopped, he turned to fantasies of spanking them. | ||
* When he punishes Emily after disturbing them in their homework, he spanks her rather than just giving her a slap. | * When he punishes Emily after disturbing them in their homework, he spanks her rather than just giving her a slap. | ||
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In the adult version, Meg's treatment under capture are more intense. She is touched up more often by soldiers, and beaten naked during the interrogation. In the pillory at Sometria, Farago assaults her. | In the adult version, Meg's treatment under capture are more intense. She is touched up more often by soldiers, and beaten naked during the interrogation. In the pillory at Sometria, Farago assaults her. | ||
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On Shell Island, Nena offers herself to | On Shell Island, Nena offers herself to John who accepts. | ||
===Susan=== | ===Susan=== | ||
Revision as of 11:46, 8 March 2026
See also: The Snow Beyond the Wall • The Snow: synopsis • The Snow: timeline • Laira Greenbank
There are three version of The Snow Beyond the Wall:
- Full version with chapters on the Maddisons' lives at Elisal
- Shorter version for publication.
- Adult version with extra text.
This page shows some of the extra text in the full and adult versions, missing from the publication version.
Full version
Chapters at Elisal
Adult version
John's sexual perversions
- The adult version reveals John's sexual fantasies. He had been spanked by his mother when young and tried this out on his sisters. When he was stopped, he turned to fantasies of spanking them.
- When he punishes Emily after disturbing them in their homework, he spanks her rather than just giving her a slap.
- He also has a fascination with Emily's panties, lingering on them and dreaming of pulling them down.
- He also has a sexual interest in his sister Susan. He enjoys looking at her body and dreaming of touching her, such as when they are hiding from the soldiers.
Meg's ordeals
In the adult version, Meg's treatment under capture are more intense. She is touched up more often by soldiers, and beaten naked during the interrogation. In the pillory at Sometria, Farago assaults her.
John and Nena
On Shell Island, Nena offers herself to John who accepts.
Susan
Susan's seduction of the porter in Rocosa is more sexual.